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Always you love, I said honestly.
Well, this was fun :lol: My first literature submission to dA EVER :iconjuap: So I hope I didn't mess up with the category :paranoid:

Anyway, this is for #SixWordStories' 52 Week Six Word Story Challenge, being this the first week, with the challenge: Write a six word story that reads from left to right and right to left and still have it make sense

    From left to right it reads:
    Always you love, I said honestly.

    And from right to left:
    Honestly said: I love you always.
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samoholic Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, too cute, I wanna try these challenges now.
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:iconthiefoworld:
They're fun! Sometimes a little hard ;P but definitely fun
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:iconlazybutt:
Wow, I like this a lot! I didn't at first because the word placement of can be confusing when first read but after reading your description and fully understanding what you were doing with the word placement I fell in love. Good work! you should submit literature more often. ;)
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:iconthiefoworld:
Well thank you! that really means a lot to me :P despite being just 6 words I really had a hard time making this! haha so it's greatly appreciated.
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littlecloudflower Jan 17, 2011  Student Writer
Ah, I thought at first, it was: Honestly, said I, "Love you always." But your version makes so much more sense! Just goes to show that punctuation DOES matter...:D
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:iconthiefoworld:
Well, that version works too :giggle:
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3wyl Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Seriously? :faint:

I really like this piece, or rather, how it works both ways when you read it and such. It helps that you've included both versions in your comments so that we get the full impact of the piece and the punctuation used... or rather, what the piece would sound like if there was punctuation and all of that.

Awesome stuff. :nod:
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:iconthiefoworld:
thank you so much! I'm glad it turned out well, I usually don't write and if you add english isn't my first language... :giggle:
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3wyl Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
That makes it even more impressive! :D
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alexandrasalas Jan 13, 2011   Digital Artist
:iconjuap:

Te quedó bonito. :>
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